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A Word of Advice - Episode 02
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Posted Feb 11, 07 by
debbie00486
Loved it. I really liked how you put the names under the characters as well as changing positions and changing clothes and hair. Good job. Also, is it just me or does this remind anyone else of Donnie Darko?
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Posted Feb 6, 07 by
alphalux
Definitely easier to distinguish the way you did it this time. The visual differences, be it small, and the names on the screen help very much. I really liked the dogpile idea. I view it as both a bit of real life humor, and yet symbolic of some of
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the international affairs going on currently. There is potential for some real comedy here, or real reflection of malicious intent. It is entirely dependent on the filmography and actors.I appreciate the character interaction. The importance of flowing and natural dialogue cannot be exaggerated in my opinion. This is the reason that filmmakers like Quentin Tarantino and Kevin Smith have been so successful. I don't know what the future holds for these characters, but if they continue to play a major role, I suggest looking closely at each characters comments, and ask yourself how each word is a brush stroke of that character's personality as a painting. Their first words might do well just to offer a hint about their point of view. Maybe someone is sarcasticly joking about X's classroom question. Maybe one impersonates the teacher. Just ideas. More on the next episode.Great job overall Myles. I will keep watching.
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Posted Feb 5, 07 by
punkyrocker189
this episode was very informitive and character building. the last part really caught my attention, i wish you would have gone on!..
common rooms and such in the school.. thats something i want. as for the little dogpile, thats pretty much an everyday
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way of life here.
the editing is still really cool. it was clever the way you changed your clothes for each character =]
Can't Wait for the next one!!
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Posted Feb 4, 07 by
tickalockallwayround
Again, this is good. Looking forward to the next episode. Liked the way you edited it.
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Posted Feb 4, 07 by
wickedrandom
damn, just as I was getting wicked interested, the episode ended...good job, though i didn't understand the high school parts, but, then again, i am american, so it would be confusing for me, eh? and i think you're doing the best you can as being
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all different characters. i wouldn't change a thing.
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Posted Feb 4, 07 by
damnedsilence
that was great, cant wait for the next episode :D! the script really captures you and it feels like you're with the character every step of the way
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Posted Feb 4, 07 by
kas78B
to comment this vid i will use words taken form the immortal snoop dogg, that was off the hizzle fo shizzle...nice one dude
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Posted Feb 3, 07 by
Idaho
A bit more distinguishing characteristics between characters. Makes it tough when your doing all of them, the visual differences are great but maybe differences in speech patterns, attitudes, basic motivations would be great.
This is cool though, you
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have the infrastructure down- now just build on it! Someone mentioned your hat- a kind of trademark for you... maybe something like that in the story that acts as a tie between scenes... a point of familiarity to refer back to that ties the story together. An object or place, even referred to in memory. I dunno, not a writer myself but a abstract suggestion. Maybe its there and my short attention-span keeps missing it!
BTW never commented on the prior episode, did give you the first hit though! Keep it up!
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Posted Feb 3, 07 by
MistarX
Obviously X is entering a vacant room. The TV is turned off but why. Public domain, these tele's are usually left to custodial help and raised from the floor?
Great out scene.
Do not change presentation, well done & 1 up.
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Posted Feb 3, 07 by
TinkerbellKat
i was hoping to tell u this myself but oh well. i think i'm having a hard time getting into this cuz it's not being fully acted out. but i'm trying. i like how you changed clothes for different characters. seems the characters are good, seem to be high
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schoolish boys. may i suggest getting other guys to act out as the other characters instead of u reading it?
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