Banal's Hymn (digital poem: poeital)

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Transplanted Eclipse: 2nd poem in the series.
Usage Note: The pronunciation of banal is not settled among educated speakers of American English. Sixty more...

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Posted Aug 7, 07 by rmrsgirl
You are amazing...I am awestruck...

Posted May 3, 07 by peppercandy
Contains richness not typically found in such form. Two Thumbs Up.

Posted May 5, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
How very lovely -- thank you so much.

Posted Apr 30, 07 by CallMeHol
your poem and reading takes me on a journey and by the end I am praying in earnest. Just amazing Shari, so beautiful and real. thank you for it. Hol

Posted May 5, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
So nice to see you here, Hol!

Thank you for sharing your "journey" with this poem; it's always very interesting to know what another takes from it (it can be so varied!), it's quite fascinating to me.

I still remember your vid on the mandala ... I love more...

Posted Apr 29, 07 by tree3
I kept seeing Christina Rosetti

Posted May 5, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
That's fascinating--and flattering--thank you. I'll have to ponder that...

... in the meantime, I am right now searching for a line that captures me from Christina (10 minutes have passed)... ah, here we go:

"She gave up beauty in her tender youth, gave more...

Posted Apr 29, 07 by LovelyGiraffe
Your poem is like a lit novena candle

Posted May 5, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
THAT was a beautiful turn of phrase and very appreciated--Thank You!

Posted Apr 29, 07 by MistarX
Unfortunately peace of mind may not even come in death!

Posted May 5, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
Hello MistarX! Good to see you, my friend. As to peace of mind, I prefer to take mine in the here and now, preferably with a nice cuppa tea. :~)

Posted Apr 28, 07 by Dickens123
I am even more impressed that you wrote the piece!! FANTASTIC! BRAVO!!

Posted Apr 28, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
aww ... that makes me feel a little bashful and gives me a "yipee" all the way down to the tips of my toes. Thank you, Dickens!

Posted Apr 28, 07 by Dickens123
Allen Ginsberg?? Great reading! Hit!

Posted Apr 28, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
Wow, you thought I was reading Ginsberg? That's a huge compliment! Thank you!

The poem is mine, but I am definitely influenced by Ginsberg and that period. Thanks, Dickens. :~)

Posted Apr 22, 07 by FanvanMel
Hi Shari. Finally took the time to check your vids. This one is so... how do I say it? It is overwelming. Have to see/hear and see-hear this one a few times, -and not only because English is not my native language! Your voice and timbre is beautiful. more...

Posted Apr 22, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
Heck, yes, it's a compliment! Wow, thanks--he was unbelievable. I am honored by that compliment.

Oh yeah, and Smutfish ROCKS!

Posted Apr 18, 07 by rclark23
My 1st time on your channel Shari, & how can one describe your poem,, wow... felt like I got hit by both barrels on [what is Life]?
Would like to see you enter this one in a contest maybe in the link below, oh & btw,, you we're Great my Friend
Poetry websites more...

Posted Apr 22, 07 by BrokenHeartRobot
Hey, rclark, you make a good first impression. :~)

Thanks for the great feedback and I will definitely check out this website.

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