Loss of Will

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Scripted?

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Posted Aug 4, 08 by SisterNan
Don't be tempted to peek at the last page because you may not be able to return to your bookmark.

Posted Aug 4, 08 by 30andout
Or want to.

Posted Aug 2, 08 by NimbleThimble
Great thoughts and glad you share them with us!

Posted Aug 2, 08 by 30andout
Thank you for always coming back!

Posted Aug 1, 08 by Maddog180
Is life meant to be easy? I choose not to read the script. I'll ad lib my own lines! Thank you very much!
Poets make me think... I like that about you
Peace!

Posted Aug 2, 08 by 30andout
Thanks, Willie. Most of the time I'm just trying to make myself think!

Posted Aug 1, 08 by gabrielized
Even the most scripted farce can break out into a surprise. Theatre is like that.
Maybe life is too.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
In the past, I've been known to be the comic relief.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by Quevida55
That felt somewhat depressing, but I liked it.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
I think you got an early draft.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by CallMeHol
All this on the water really brings it home... how overwhelming the water can be if you don't have a good container, a good boat. Maybe trade the script for a map.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
A treasure map.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by NatureJunkie
From now on, whenever someone tries to mitigate the impact of an unfortunate turn of events with "perhaps it was meant to be this way," I will have the last line of this poem to offer myself better comfort.

Quite lovely, Ken.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
Thank you, Robin. If it's a script, don't let them tell you that you can't ad lib!

Posted Aug 1, 08 by happyyoda121
This leaves me with a lot of thinking to do....is the light at the end of the tunnel an oncoming train?

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
Coming or going?

Posted Aug 1, 08 by LVbianSynic
mmm yes
Poetry is meant to be heard (even better when cradled by the lapping at the shore of a Great lake), but it sure doesn't hurt to read it, too.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
Thanks for watching... and proof reading.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by flophousepoodle
I don't know.

Posted Aug 1, 08 by 30andout
Maybe the answer is in the sequel.

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